Tuesday, February 15, 2011

the comparison between the government here and the government in other countries

well we can compare a lot of things about the government in both Philippines and other country, i can't name specific country because all of the countries is better than ours in regards to the structure of government. first of all government on other country the structure of government their is not corrupt that's why they have so many resources i know sometimes get a little out of control but they're kind of government is the one who can control they're own actions like they can manage the ups and downs of their society, comparing it to our society one problem with the government, cram goes to the officials like they don't know what to do because they're is none unity compared to the other society that is higher rank than us. and another thing other society can sustain the needs of the poor without any argument or anything but when even if the government promised that they will sustain the needs of the poor, they didn't fulfill it, so they always way that they will change the world by lessening the poor in the Philippines but when they say it they only make conflicts in the hearts of the Filipinos 

1 comment:

  1. First, this : "i can't name specific country because all of the countries is better than ours in regards to the structure of government" -- You started your essay with a baseless, hasty generalization then.

    Next, it was difficult for me to read your post because there are just two sentences. The second one is one LONG, RAMBLING, run-on sentence. It seems like you have forgotten how to punctuate, capitalize and separate your ideas into comprehensible sentences.

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